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Original Message 1/16 02-Nov-05 @ 10:48 PM Edit: 06-Nov-05 | 07:28 PM - Knowing

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More structure now, comments appreciated.

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Message 2/16 03-Nov-05 @ 11:10 AM - RE: Knowing

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Yeah, I'm thinking a bit too much experimenting with this one. I thinks it's going to the can, too M. Manson sounding.

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Message 3/16 03-Nov-05 @ 03:26 PM - RE: Knowing

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hmm... heavy funkness with a jazz edge...... yeah, i like it, but i think productionwise, i'd add something to emphasise a 'chorus' in there otherwise it's in danger of being "the same all the way thru", and the golder rule of production is, "dont give them everything at once", hold something back for later

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Message 4/16 03-Nov-05 @ 05:36 PM - RE: Knowing

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hmm... heavy funkness with a jazz edge...... yeah, i like it, but i think productionwise, id add something to emphasise a chorus in there otherwise its in danger of being the same all the way thru, and the golder rule of production is, dont give them everything at once, hold something back for later

I just uploaded a new version, hope you check it out?

Dropped the guitar, added an organ, moved some things around, added some more vocals and a scratching section.

I'm much happier with it!

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Message 5/16 06-Nov-05 @ 07:27 PM - RE: Knowing

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Anybody want to comment on the structure of the new version?

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Message 6/16 07-Nov-05 @ 01:52 AM - RE: Knowing

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not sure, for me it all comes in too quick, too confused, nothing locks me down to the groove before the vocal arrives cos it's busy changing all the time.

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Message 7/16 07-Nov-05 @ 01:55 AM - RE: Knowing

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personaly i'd start it with the riff which appears at 26 seconds, filter that around for 16 bars & then ease the vocal in - i wouldnt drop the kit in till the second verse/cycle of vocals... ro somethimg like that, i';d have to try it and fiddle

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Message 8/16 07-Nov-05 @ 08:55 PM - RE: Knowing

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I definately agree.

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Message 9/16 15-Nov-05 @ 03:37 AM - RE: Knowing

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Interesting vocals. But yeah, the track should build up to the vox part and be in that mood.... in fact take out the intro Hey bit completely.... and save the following 2nd riff for later.

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Message 10/16 15-Nov-05 @ 12:33 PM - RE: Knowing

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bit hard to tell cos there's no previous version to play & compare... i seem to remember the first version was more funky at the intro

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wasn't there a guitar riff?

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