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Subject: Ambient Dance
Original Message 1/14 14-Feb-06 @ 08:35 PM Edit: 14-Feb-06 | 10:11 PM - Ambient Dance
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Message 2/14 14-Feb-06 @ 08:36 PM Edit: 14-Feb-06 | 10:11 PM - Ambient Dance
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Message 3/14 14-Feb-06 @ 08:37 PM Edit: 14-Feb-06 | 10:27 PM - Ambient Dance
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Ambient Dance track.. need review.
142 BPM
[24Bits]
[ Logic Audio ]
The track here
The Remix
Message 4/14 15-Feb-06 @ 12:01 PM - RE: Ambient Dance
Right at start I had a deja vu, astral projection - searching for ufo-s if you know what I mean
Sounds are nice, warm, clear, no sharp edges, everything flows nicely... a bit on the conservative side, which can be just what you were after. Consider this as a personal remark from someone who likes things distorted to death: with this tempo, I'd make things a bit more agressive. Otherwise it is really soothing and gentle, but then maybe the tempo is a bit too much for the laid back atmosphere...
And yes, at the end I thought it is just a breakdown, but the song ended and left me wanting more. Also, a trance-ish tune with 140+ BPM usually STARTS at 4 minutes
Now, I might sound a bit negative, so lets put things into place: this is a very nice song, great percussions, tight mix, wonderful sounds... it just needs that 5% edge.. you know a strange voice, a sample, whatever, because it sounds too much "out-of-the box". And make it longer, it really deserves another 4 minutes with some kind of revelation.
Message 5/14 15-Feb-06 @ 12:06 PM - RE: Ambient Dance
Now, we're talking
Also, sounds are much more un-earthy here, the piano might need a little bit of treatment (lfo?, short decay?) to help it assimilate into this synthetic soundscape. And again, too short, it just started, and it is already over... give us more!
Message 6/14 15-Feb-06 @ 12:10 PM - RE: Ambient Dance
Rags .aka. Welder wrote:
Original:
Right at start I had a deja vu, astral projection - searching for ufo-s if you know what I mean
Sounds are nice, warm, clear, no sharp edges, everything flows nicely... a bit on the conservative side, which can be just what you were after. Consider this as a personal remark from someone who likes things distorted to death: with this tempo, Id make things a bit more agressive. Otherwise it is really soothing and gentle, but then maybe the tempo is a bit too much for the laid back atmosphere...
And yes, at the end I thought it is just a breakdown, but the song ended and left me wanting more. Also, a trance-ish tune with 140+ BPM usually STARTS at 4 minutes
Now, I might sound a bit negative, so lets put things into place: this is a very nice song, great percussions, tight mix, wonderful sounds... it just needs that 5% edge.. you know a strange voice, a sample, whatever, because it sounds too much out-of-the box. And make it longer, it really deserves another 4 minutes with some kind of revelation.
Yes thats was exatly what i was after thx for great feedback.
I agree that the tempo ..i gonna make it 137 or 140 BPM. Theres also 2 versions of this track..i am not sure wich of them i i shud work on. The remxi is 139 BPM.. I cud make it more agressiv i got now like 20 oscialtors running with LFO/ENV filthers and stuff kinda push my system to the limit hehe not sure i can put in more..i can add some voice and fx shud be ok..
I will post a new track with 4 mins when i got it compleat this was just a preiew for review and feedback
thx again..
Message 7/14 15-Feb-06 @ 06:58 PM - RE: Ambient Dance
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I had an idea for a script once. It's basically Jaws except when the guys in the boat are going after Jaws, they look around and there's an even bigger Jaws. The guys have to team up with Jaws to get Bigger Jaws.... I call it... Big Jaws!!!
Message 8/14 15-Feb-06 @ 10:08 PM - RE: Ambient Dance
k wrote:
awesome graphic man!!... those mushies look good enuff to eat!
hehe thx K
i dident model the mushies..even i am in to 3D graphcis..yeah would be nice to eat does digital mushies
Message 9/14 16-Feb-06 @ 01:15 PM - RE: Ambient Dance
so, if one DID eat 'digital mushies', what'd happen... i wonder....
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I had an idea for a script once. It's basically Jaws except when the guys in the boat are going after Jaws, they look around and there's an even bigger Jaws. The guys have to team up with Jaws to get Bigger Jaws.... I call it... Big Jaws!!!
Message 10/14 16-Feb-06 @ 03:32 PM Edit: 16-Feb-06 | 03:33 PM - RE: Ambient Dance
k wrote:
mmmm.... a mushie punch made with with fresh lemons & lots of crushed ice!!
so, if one DID eat digital mushies, whatd happen... i wonder....
hehe good qeustion.. Maybe you be like me? digital freak.. jokeing
thx to rages great feedback i made a new track with some of the same sounds, trying to make it abit more agreesiv (had to overclock my CPU (AMD64) 140 BPM 6 min long.. and yes the voice is from a very cool moive..
finaly made the record..any feedback would great.
new track -> Platu
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