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Original Message 1/16 02-Nov-05 @ 10:48 PM Edit: 06-Nov-05 | 07:28 PM - Knowing
Message 2/16 03-Nov-05 @ 11:10 AM - RE: Knowing
Message 3/16 03-Nov-05 @ 03:26 PM - RE: Knowing
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I had an idea for a script once. It's basically Jaws except when the guys in the boat are going after Jaws, they look around and there's an even bigger Jaws. The guys have to team up with Jaws to get Bigger Jaws.... I call it... Big Jaws!!!
Message 4/16 03-Nov-05 @ 05:36 PM - RE: Knowing
k wrote:
hmm... heavy funkness with a jazz edge...... yeah, i like it, but i think productionwise, id add something to emphasise a chorus in there otherwise its in danger of being the same all the way thru, and the golder rule of production is, dont give them everything at once, hold something back for later
I just uploaded a new version, hope you check it out?
Dropped the guitar, added an organ, moved some things around, added some more vocals and a scratching section.
I'm much happier with it!
Message 5/16 06-Nov-05 @ 07:27 PM - RE: Knowing
Message 6/16 07-Nov-05 @ 01:52 AM - RE: Knowing
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I had an idea for a script once. It's basically Jaws except when the guys in the boat are going after Jaws, they look around and there's an even bigger Jaws. The guys have to team up with Jaws to get Bigger Jaws.... I call it... Big Jaws!!!
Message 7/16 07-Nov-05 @ 01:55 AM - RE: Knowing
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I had an idea for a script once. It's basically Jaws except when the guys in the boat are going after Jaws, they look around and there's an even bigger Jaws. The guys have to team up with Jaws to get Bigger Jaws.... I call it... Big Jaws!!!
Message 9/16 15-Nov-05 @ 03:37 AM - RE: Knowing
Message 10/16 15-Nov-05 @ 12:33 PM - RE: Knowing
???
wasn't there a guitar riff?
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I had an idea for a script once. It's basically Jaws except when the guys in the boat are going after Jaws, they look around and there's an even bigger Jaws. The guys have to team up with Jaws to get Bigger Jaws.... I call it... Big Jaws!!!
Message 11/16 19-Nov-05 @ 05:24 PM - RE: Knowing
k wrote:
bit hard to tell cos theres no previous version to play & compare... i seem to remember the first version was more funky at the intro
???
wasnt there a guitar riff?
Yep, it did.
I'll see about tweaking it up again.
Message 12/16 21-Nov-05 @ 06:29 AM - RE: Knowing
at first I thought it is the bass that doesn't work, the got used to it ...
Still, I think this rhodes piano stuff does not fit perfetly. It does add to the "falling-apart-like" mood of the track (and I like that), but it is a bit too off-noteish to my taste (and yeah, I usually have the same problem when trying to fix a rhodes piano into a song).
But, all in all, I like this.
ps: not sure, but maybe the vocals are a bit too up-front towards the end of the track.. just a little bit...
cheers,
Rags
Message 14/16 22-Nov-05 @ 05:21 PM - RE: Knowing
Rags wrote:
Pretty cool vocals, and I like the drum/scratch combo as well, but....
at first I thought it is the bass that doesnt work, the got used to it ...
Still, I think this rhodes piano stuff does not fit perfetly. It does add to the falling-apart-like mood of the track (and I like that), but it is a bit too off-noteish to my taste (and yeah, I usually have the same problem when trying to fix a rhodes piano into a song).
But, all in all, I like this.
ps: not sure, but maybe the vocals are a bit too up-front towards the end of the track.. just a little bit...
cheers,
Rags
I'll pull it off the shelf in a bit and take note of all yer comments.
Message 15/16 22-Nov-05 @ 05:25 PM - RE: Knowing
Absorb Fish wrote:
are you the vocalist?
Yeah, are they ok?
Message 16/16 22-Nov-05 @ 06:28 PM - RE: Knowing
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