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Original Message 1/10 26-May-06 @ 03:32 PM Edit: 26-May-06 | 03:33 PM - new member with a coupe of new trks

smrdouk

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Hi,
I'v posted a couple of new(ish) well they were my first attempts about a year old now, im currently working on new stuff and for mpart of a 5 sonf mini album.

Would love to hear ant thoughts /feeback if anyone feels like it.
Many thanks
Mark

8:15 bulletin

crkvica

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Message 2/10 26-May-06 @ 06:10 PM - RE: new member with a coupe of new trks

Rags .aka. Welder

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Nice tracks. Crkvica has a rather strange change around 3:05, and also you're using way too much reverb on both of them I think. I would cut back on reverb, especially on the drums, it smears together everything a bit too much.

Crkvica starts very gentle, it evolves into a nice song, but from around 2:0 it remains quite static... except that guitar part you introduce around 3:00... so add breakdowns I think, that would break up the thing and also make it a bit longer, and use reverb more sparsely, at the moment it really sounds like a recording from a bathtube-party

Anyway welcome and please consider that english is not my first language, and I am typing this half asleep, and that also makes me a bit picky.

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Message 3/10 27-May-06 @ 09:56 PM - RE: new member with a coupe of new trks

smrdouk

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hi,
thanks for your reply. I'll bear that in mind, these were kind of learning process so will try and hold back abit on the new stuff. All feedback is cool though so cheers for that..

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Message 4/10 28-May-06 @ 10:55 AM - RE: new member with a coupe of new trks

Rags .aka. Welder

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No worries, all I wanted is to provide a bit of a constructive feedback... so don't hold the new stuff back!

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Message 5/10 28-May-06 @ 11:38 AM - RE: new member with a coupe of new trks

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yeah, a bit too much verb perhaps i agree. otherwise, it's ok, although it sounds like there's been no use of any hi-pass or lo-cut filters, everything has a rumbly botton-end on it, even the vocal sample and stuff that might benefit from rolling off the bottom end which overally is therefore slightly overloaded. I like the drums alot, subtle little variation touches but cool. The guitar sound could be better. It sounded like mebbe it was di'd straight in so it has that slightly 'elestic-band' quality to it

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Message 6/10 28-May-06 @ 11:39 AM - RE: new member with a coupe of new trks

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welcome by the way

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Message 7/10 04-Jun-06 @ 11:13 PM - RE: new member with a coupe of new trks

smrdouk

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cheers again, for the feedback, been on hols so only just able to reply

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Message 8/10 06-Jun-06 @ 12:14 AM - RE: new member with a coupe of new trks

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hey, I like 8.15 Bulletin. Its really good. Its got a classic chord change in, but its done differently. I like the continuos phasing pad you got going all the way thru it. Love the guitar sequence that you only hear right at the end.

I'm listening to Crkvica right now, the drums have kicked in. Cool. I cant really comment one what the others have said, K talking about filters and stuff. I'm listening to it headphones. I've never been very good at the technical side of things. But I like this a lot. I like the drum programming, and the break with the guitar going is good.

At the end of the day, both tracks are very good. Crkvica is more stomping with more attitude, and its a very good track.

Definately loose some of the reverb on the drums, as its swamping the track a bit. Let yer pads and fx do the reverb. Usually drums should be left dry.

I really like those two tracks.

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Message 9/10 07-Jun-06 @ 05:32 PM - RE: new member with a coupe of new trks

smrdouk

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thanks a lot Jock, nice to get any kind of feedback as im learning about this production stuff.
looking forward to getting some new stuff finished although as ever not enough time..
cheers again

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Message 10/10 12-Jun-06 @ 05:13 AM - RE: new member with a coupe of new trks

urbicide

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i like what u created... but the melodies dont have gimmicks in my ears....

chill and vibey. I wonder why some elements in the periodic table of charts dont mix right with others. maybe its the meaning of what they are.

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