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Original Message 1/6 16-Apr-07 @ 04:35 PM - could this work as film music or in a car commerci

t_herion

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hey all!

a little background of to put it shortly: I've been producing electronic music since the year 2000 and some of my techno/trance stuff has been published through a dutch record label called Galactive. I did a couple of tracks there under a project name "Primo Lux" and my first single, called "Turnpoint" , took a first place in the dutch dancechart for a short period of time.

Recently I've been experimenting with different styles of music and after finishing my newest track decided to put it available for public, for a feedback or so.

So here's the track: http://koti.mbnet.fi/~peteman/biisit/Petri_Suhonen_-_Stuck_In_A_Quagmire.mp3

size:6,9 mb
quality: VBR
lenght: 3:40
style: you decide, at least not techno/trance

ANY feedback is welcome!

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Message 2/6 16-Apr-07 @ 08:11 PM - RE: could this work as film music or in a car com

Rags .aka. Welder

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Me like it!

Great melody, and nice sounds too.

Have you considered changing the main melody a little bit around the end? Not that it is not nice this way but that would definetly make it a complete "story"... well in my opinion of course

Cheers,
Welder

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Message 3/6 16-Apr-07 @ 11:27 PM - RE: could this work as film music or in a car com

nme

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This is a really nice track, I would have liked to have heard a chorus maybe to break it up a little & then reintroduce that cool melody again?

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Message 4/6 17-Apr-07 @ 07:58 AM - RE: could this work as film music or in a car com

t_herion

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Thanks for your comments guys, appreciated!

Those are good ideas, could work...

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Message 5/6 17-Apr-07 @ 11:30 AM - RE: could this work as film music or in a car com

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yeah not bad but the mix lacks much dynamic or spacial quality, it's been crushed to fuck by compression (the kik is non existant) and the mix doesnt have much depth and power, dont be afraid to push things hard and get some drive and grit

the theme is very strong tho

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Message 6/6 17-Apr-07 @ 12:45 PM - RE: could this work as film music or in a car com

t_herion

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Thanks for your comments!
Yeah its heavily overcompressed, i have a bad habit to do that for my mixes just to gain loudness... bad bad habit, i know

If listened through a decent monitors or headphones the heavily unbalanced and jumping bass frequencies - for example - are clearly heard....

I did it sort of a purpose, just for the loudness, and I think most non-musician listeners wont pay attention to it... but it's easilly fixed when needed

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