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Original Message 1/17 23-Sep-03 @ 06:52 AM - we played till dark

Garuna

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New track up. Sloooow...

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Message 2/17 23-Sep-03 @ 07:40 AM - RE: we played till dark

psylichon

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And gooooood!

Very nice vibe. Very glad to hear that you made that loop yourself. It's quality, my friend. As I said in chat, this is some serious baby-makin' music. I see a perfectly set fireplace, some fine red wine, rose petals, lube.... very nice atmosphere, you manwhore!

Two words of advice, one engineerial, one compositional.

1. The string line in the beginning is a bit too prominent. I think it's a bit too loud, or just doesn't move enough, dynamically. Try bringing it down a bit?

2. The guitar arp... lovely. But the top note is a little too prominent. It just plays too many times. Maybe on the last time you hit it in the phrase (or the last two times... at the top of the arp), hit an A instead of a B. It's a little trite to land on the 9th like that, but in this case I think it's a better choice, melodically, than landing on that B all the time.

Just a few tidbits. Otherwise, the track sits perfectly with me. Great job, kris...

psy

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Message 3/17 23-Sep-03 @ 09:38 AM - RE: we played till dark

GrooveMonkey

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Yeah, def a quality track! Have to agree with Psy though, that the strings are a tad too loud.

Nice work

G

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Message 4/17 23-Sep-03 @ 04:18 PM - RE: we played till dark

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lol! "baby making music!"

now i gotta hear this...

-j

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Message 5/17 23-Sep-03 @ 04:34 PM - RE: we played till dark

queasy00

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yea man.. time for some lovin' --and babies.

i love that drum track too. so soft 'n 'easy!

-j

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Message 6/17 24-Sep-03 @ 04:10 AM Edit: 24-Sep-03 | 04:11 AM - RE: we played till dark

Broken Silence

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I love that drum line that comes in at the beginin---------

Wait that guitar arp just kicked in. I love this track.

The only thing that bugs me is the sawish FX sweep- don't like them at all.

God this track is awesome- those hits! Wow!

It seems that the break kind of jumps in volume, probably just me as Psy didn't notice

This sounds like shit that could so be pushed. Wow man- this is some good stuff.

I don't really see baby makin'

But more of chilled out rainy day mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

I really wish I could program drums like this. Bliss. The second break with the sweeps sounds good, but in begining...urg!

That's what I get from this- Just smack me in the face with a happy stick kinda thing. May I burn this and take it with me tomorow on my horrible subway ride in?

Whooah at like 620ish wow.

This track is hands down one of the most enjoyable, quality listens I have had in a while. Would begging help you write more like this?

Andrew

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Message 7/17 24-Sep-03 @ 07:26 AM - RE: we played till dark

Garuna

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Wow, I thought the only one who would like this would be clay and he hasn't even posted... woohoo!

Thanks for the comments. Thought about the suggestions.... i see your point(s), but i like the dominant strings. Burn and beg away BS hehe... yeah I'll make more slow stuff later.

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Message 8/17 24-Sep-03 @ 04:21 PM - RE: we played till dark

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come now... you didn't think I'd like it??

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Message 9/17 24-Sep-03 @ 06:01 PM - RE: we played till dark

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huh? No I meant that you would have said something if the break actually jumped in volume--if that come now was directed at me ;)

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Message 10/17 24-Sep-03 @ 06:07 PM - RE: we played till dark

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It's Super Gentle Porn Music.

Almost sound trackish. You could easily hear something like this on a 'feed your head' compilation, cool.

I like the phasing on the beats. Nice dubby echos, too. I guess the string pads could be a little softer if I was going to be a picky bugger.

Neato.

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