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Subject: the shine
Original Message 1/25 25-Aug-04 @ 07:24 AM - the shine
Message 2/25 25-Aug-04 @ 09:43 AM - RE: the shine
nice and subtle so far. I like your use of metal and glass percussion sounds. It
really creates a cold and desolate soundscape. I'm waiting for something here,
it's a very long period without percussion, but you fill that void with some nice
harmonies. Now that the drums have come back in though, I feel like I've
misssed something. It needs to have something new with that drop, like a
doubletime beat, or a bassline or something. It's a great track, and even as a
'track in progress' it stands up fine on its own.
Peaceout,
Peter
Message 3/25 25-Aug-04 @ 09:58 AM - RE: the shine
cheers,
welder
Message 5/25 25-Aug-04 @ 05:04 PM - RE: the shine
also, most of the song uploaders doesn't come here to ask for comments / say hello / advertise their work / whatever... I mean, it's fine with me, I just wonder why. I guess it's not because dt forums doesn't have any avatars
Message 7/25 27-Aug-04 @ 02:53 AM - RE: the shine
i have my theories but that's irrelevant....just like most of my theories (!) .
but i simply think people are growing up and have gotten bored.
this is natural.
anyway rags....i'm not sure that it's the beat that needs to bring life back into the last part of the track......
but rather those nice subtle harmonies which get introduced midway through the song....and then disappear. i think those should be brought back but like really almost in a big way.
i think you could manage to keep the drums simple this way....and also remove a little of that coldness which needs to give way to a big dose of sunshine....
otherwise.....a very good start. i like those sneaky distorted bits.
Message 8/25 27-Aug-04 @ 09:26 AM - RE: the shine
Hell no.
But thanks for the listen Clay, I'll see if I can do something for those nice harmonies, maybe I can arrange something for them at the end :-) If I'd only know which part you mean... (time when they start maybe?)
Message 9/25 27-Aug-04 @ 09:28 AM - RE: the shine
Ok fine. But what about those others who are still young? Also, what about the new, fresh ones, or are we too old for them to mix?
"18 till I die"
Message 10/25 27-Aug-04 @ 02:03 PM - RE: the shine
Quite a few not so open to different types of music, newer music, some more commercially popular, some not - it doesnt matter, holding on too much somewhere, sometimes - clay could have a real good point, bored thing- but if the young blood keep getting batted staright back out the park, then the old will get older, and dwindle- atleast somewhat.....and the young will group together, still, in other places- more comfartable places.
But- *just* maybe it IS just a summer thing
Anyhow, i dont really feel comfartable commenting on stuff im not so sure about, but it was pretty nice (if that even helps)- keep it up, especially if your 25 or under
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