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Original Message Date: 25-Aug-04 @ 07:24 AM - the shine

welder (aka. ragnarok)

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Cheers folks. Here's something new from me, some moody, melancholic night-music. I've been staying away from the keys for almost 6 months now, but as my life seems to get back to normal, I tend to enjoy making music again. Not a flawless piece, so your comments are very wellcome.

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Message 11/25 27-Aug-04 @ 02:58 PM - RE: the shine

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"waiting for the old people to disappear"

don't worry, we're standing by the stairs !

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Message 12/25 28-Aug-04 @ 09:38 AM - RE: the shine

queasy00

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hello,

I liked this one. At first the main riff bothered, like it was going too fast or something. Then again, I like how it follows the drums in unison.

I think the main theme was reintroduced too quickly after the breakdown tho. It seems that it's (the riff) siginificant enough that you could departure from it to create a build of tension in the listener... y'nkow something like "oh ya.. here comes that riff again!!! woo!". I don't mean balls-out, just a small touch more pronounced.

shoot I babble

the distortion tweaking at the end was cool too.

-j

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Message 13/25 30-Aug-04 @ 07:27 AM - RE: the shine

welder (aka. ragnarok)

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blu: shit, I'm 28

But thanks for popping in and listening.

queasy: the main riff at the beginning.. well that was a bit overcomplicated. Also, I'm working on a bit different arrangement, and I'll probably add/remove a few sounds here and there.. well, we'll see. thanks everyone for the comments!

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Message 14/25 31-Aug-04 @ 02:13 PM - RE: the shine

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very nice. i also really like jupiter landing. mmm...aggro

is there a possibility to get a cd ?

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Message 15/25 01-Sep-04 @ 07:48 AM - RE: the shine

welder (aka. ragnarok)

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Sure, just drom me a mail from my user page.

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Message 16/25 01-Sep-04 @ 05:12 PM - RE: the shine

Absorb Fish

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heh - about the code of silence - i've just been too lazy to log in lately - I really wish there wasn't that thing where you have to log in to post...

Anyways - I have been listening but haven't been commenting on anyone's stuff - I'll start here. I love the melody here - the glass bell sound I can never get enough of. I Agree that the drums need to evolve during this track - otherwise - it's fine so far.

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Message 17/25 01-Sep-04 @ 05:12 PM Edit: 02-Sep-04 | 11:51 PM - RE: the shine

Absorb Fish

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[Edited Because of Repeat]

Wonder why that happened...

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Message 18/25 01-Sep-04 @ 05:38 PM - RE: the shine

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you can check the "remember me on this computer" box and forget about it

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Message 19/25 01-Sep-04 @ 09:30 PM - RE: the shine

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yeah - it works y'know!

love the panning timed thing - feel like it's gonna be drum&bass when it arrives.... um...

i like the way it's not repetitive, there are touches and it feels more organic always best for ambient... great track man, pro quality easily, i'd be happy if i bought an album and it was on it... fine....

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Message 20/25 01-Sep-04 @ 09:45 PM - RE: the shine

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yeah man.... i aint got time to listen to all you uploaded, but from sampling a few, i'd say you're a 'natural' - it's got an overall very musical quality to it all, hard to explain, perhaps organic is a better word, all the stuff does stuff at timing positions and in a method that feels organic, not overly planned mentaly or something, i dunno - fuckin go for it!.... great stuff man, really - I'd buy it & play it.

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