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Subject: Its been quite a while
Original Message Date: 12-Jun-05 @ 05:44 AM - Its been quite a while
"Hovercraft (mental divergence)"
I had it as a 64k on the internet comp so thats what got uploaded. doesnt sound too bad for that rate.
Message 11/22 14-Jun-05 @ 08:26 PM - RE: Its been quite a while
not much else to say but good sh*t man!
Message 12/22 15-Jun-05 @ 12:18 AM - RE: Its been quite a while
"this is a fun track. it seems there is a plethora of mid and high ideas, smart ideas. there is not enough variety in the lower register. i think it's missing a low end melody of some sort. this track needs a low end representative. something that speaks on behalf of the other low end frequencies, which are too few and far between. i like a bassline that has a life of its own. something that drives and moves, independent of the rest of the track. something that coincides nicely, nevertheless. otherwise, it get's a bit tedious.
i think the vocal sample could be introduced into the track a bit more. it kind of seems like it's a background thought. i would bring it out more, and more often (as i already said). also, the vocal kind of seems here and there, without any raison d'etre. frankly, this track doesn't seem finished. more low end layers are needed..."
people say funny shit sometimes.
hey maarten! how's it?
Message 14/22 18-Jun-05 @ 06:10 PM - RE: Its been quite a while
tis true what they say about critics? those who cant DO...?
I dunno.I always read what people have to say, and I appreciate them taking their time, but when someone comes off like they know what your work should sound like more than you do? thts a bit twitchy
Message 15/22 21-Jun-05 @ 12:52 AM - RE: Its been quite a while
wow! AND WE GOT DIFFERNT COLOR fonts now! woo!!!
Nice tunage like the synths in the track very nicely done, Nice to hear you going again.
Message 17/22 27-Jun-05 @ 08:24 AM - RE: Its been quite a while
- I THINk it needs heavey guitar riff somewhere
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I had an idea for a script once. It's basically Jaws except when the guys in the boat are going after Jaws, they look around and there's an even bigger Jaws. The guys have to team up with Jaws to get Bigger Jaws.... I call it... Big Jaws!!!
Message 18/22 30-Jun-05 @ 12:21 AM - RE: Its been quite a while
no guitars. not my thing. I dont like mixing peanut butter with my chocolate.
altho...the idea of a "breakpunk" band certainly has occurred to me
Message 19/22 30-Jun-05 @ 01:39 PM - RE: Its been quite a while
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I had an idea for a script once. It's basically Jaws except when the guys in the boat are going after Jaws, they look around and there's an even bigger Jaws. The guys have to team up with Jaws to get Bigger Jaws.... I call it... Big Jaws!!!
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