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Original Message 1/7 03-May-01 @ 05:02 PM - Lifes Mistake__slickqd new track

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Hello everyone,
I have not been able to visit DT for a while, due to everyione i know in my office being fired, or laidoff...its very stressful. Anyways, here is a song i wrote due to my situation in life. Its like very different, and commercial...which kind of makes me feel cool, and yet like a sell out...could you check it out...please...tell me how my structure is

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Message 2/7 03-May-01 @ 08:42 PM - RE: Lifes Mistake__slickqd new track

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Sorry to hear about your office. You never know. So I listened. Didn't think it was that pop sounding. I could hear a vocal on top. I think it would be nice with a vocal line. Thought the structure was OK. Maybe a break or 2 would have worked nicely. I guess that's what I'm thinking with a vocalist...verse chorus verse chorus or something like that. But what do I know. Thanks for sharing.

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Message 3/7 03-May-01 @ 09:53 PM - RE: Lifes Mistake__slickqd new track

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Yeah,...ok, i need to learn that with making songst...verse chorus verse chorus...I just feel the song becomes to repetitive that way..like...ok..i have heard this already..when i make the songs i try to make it different the whole way. Oh Well...what do i know

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Message 4/7 03-May-01 @ 10:21 PM - RE: Lifes Mistake__slickqd new track

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I definately agree with you. Just thought of that 'cause you mentioned it being kinda pop. That's what pop does.

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Message 5/7 04-May-01 @ 05:13 AM - RE: Lifes Mistake__slickqd new track

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definItely dammit

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Message 6/7 04-May-01 @ 06:06 AM - RE: Lifes Mistake__slickqd new track

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Ok..so, is there any advice you guys can give me on teh song...does it suck?, do i need to keep my day job?...lol

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Message 7/7 04-May-01 @ 03:59 PM - RE: Lifes Mistake__slickqd new track

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Totally old school hi energy sounding to me. ala TransX - Living On Video. It's cool. I also hear a vocal track happening on there. Good ideas. Keep developing it. I think it'll evolve on it's own if you let it...

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