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Original Message 1/13 18-Aug-03 @ 10:05 AM - opinions wanted
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hey guys I got 2 tracks up that need some
input. First one is called Dravel and the
second one is called Rock it On. Expect
something with a break type sound. I'm trying
to do my own thing but I need some input.
good or bad? tell me what you think.
Message 2/13 18-Aug-03 @ 10:31 AM - RE: opinions wanted
Message 3/13 19-Aug-03 @ 06:14 AM - RE: opinions wanted
one myself also.
Anyone else have any comments? I really
could use some constructive criticism. I like
doing music but I feel I'm not doing my best. I
end up seeing how they way I want to make a
tune but it never turns out right. What do I lack
and what is memorable. I'm pretty open to
what you guys have to say.
Message 4/13 19-Aug-03 @ 06:20 AM - RE: opinions wanted
the song is sweet and bumping in a nice upbeat loungy way....but maybe you're playing it just a bit on the safe side?
Message 5/13 19-Aug-03 @ 06:48 AM Edit: 19-Aug-03 | 06:49 AM - RE: opinions wanted
Dravel is a nice track, I especially like the way you handle drums and percussion. For my taste, it's a bit minimalistic, but hey, I like minimalistic stuff . My only concern is that the song doesn't really seem to progress from its starting point. The vibe is great though, so maybe all you need to do is to pick one sound, do something different with it and try to find a context, where it works. (I would start with that flanged pad sound, but that's just my personal preference.
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rags
Message 6/13 19-Aug-03 @ 07:53 AM - RE: opinions wanted
rework dravel-been down on myself with the
music. mcc, I agree with your impression. I did
play it on the safe side... Could you elaborate
a little more on what you said: "a little more
personal".
rags- that would definitley be the sound I
would dig into more. flange pad that is. I feel
there is potential in the beat and the loungey
pad. it could work into something more.
thanks for taking the time to comment. late
Message 7/13 19-Aug-03 @ 02:24 PM - RE: opinions wanted
Message 8/13 20-Aug-03 @ 06:18 AM - RE: opinions wanted
clear button. doh!
shit its fun, I have an amazing amount of
tracks, but they never sound right months
later. Trusting my results is where I have
problems. The chase is definitley still on. just
time to re-evaluate.
Message 9/13 27-Aug-03 @ 09:36 AM - RE: opinions wanted
Message 11/13 27-Aug-03 @ 08:29 PM - RE: opinions wanted
I would surely dig this with the headphones...
only thing is..some of the samples you drop...the percussive loop that comes in around 1:30...sounds off time?
and then...it just keeps doin the same thing...
Id say drop the long keystabdelay thing at about 1:30 or 2:00 and either add new elements or break it down dubstyle. its just too long as is
Message 12/13 28-Aug-03 @ 06:13 AM - RE: opinions wanted
the length of play for the flange pad. I should
work in something different. What I need is a
tone applicable to fill the place of the pad.
dub style? I got a lot of ideas of what that
means, but how do you see it? It does need a
good break into something subtle -- I found
relief when the beat dropped out towards the
end. idea: a good woman vocal would make
the track... hmmm. let me know your thoughts.
thanks dude.
Message 13/13 28-Aug-03 @ 08:35 AM - RE: opinions wanted
maybe only for say 16 bars, then start the other stuff back up...slightly varied in some way?
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