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Message 2/17 23-Sep-03 @ 07:40 AM - RE: we played till dark
Very nice vibe. Very glad to hear that you made that loop yourself. It's quality, my friend. As I said in chat, this is some serious baby-makin' music. I see a perfectly set fireplace, some fine red wine, rose petals, lube.... very nice atmosphere, you manwhore!
Two words of advice, one engineerial, one compositional.
1. The string line in the beginning is a bit too prominent. I think it's a bit too loud, or just doesn't move enough, dynamically. Try bringing it down a bit?
2. The guitar arp... lovely. But the top note is a little too prominent. It just plays too many times. Maybe on the last time you hit it in the phrase (or the last two times... at the top of the arp), hit an A instead of a B. It's a little trite to land on the 9th like that, but in this case I think it's a better choice, melodically, than landing on that B all the time.
Just a few tidbits. Otherwise, the track sits perfectly with me. Great job, kris...
psy
Message 3/17 23-Sep-03 @ 09:38 AM - RE: we played till dark
Nice work
G
Message 4/17 23-Sep-03 @ 04:18 PM - RE: we played till dark
now i gotta hear this...
-j
Message 5/17 23-Sep-03 @ 04:34 PM - RE: we played till dark
i love that drum track too. so soft 'n 'easy!
-j
Message 6/17 24-Sep-03 @ 04:10 AM Edit: 24-Sep-03 | 04:11 AM - RE: we played till dark
Wait that guitar arp just kicked in. I love this track.
The only thing that bugs me is the sawish FX sweep- don't like them at all.
God this track is awesome- those hits! Wow!
It seems that the break kind of jumps in volume, probably just me as Psy didn't notice
This sounds like shit that could so be pushed. Wow man- this is some good stuff.
I don't really see baby makin' But more of chilled out rainy day mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I really wish I could program drums like this. Bliss. The second break with the sweeps sounds good, but in begining...urg!
That's what I get from this- Just smack me in the face with a happy stick kinda thing. May I burn this and take it with me tomorow on my horrible subway ride in?
Whooah at like 620ish wow.
This track is hands down one of the most enjoyable, quality listens I have had in a while. Would begging help you write more like this?
Andrew
Message 7/17 24-Sep-03 @ 07:26 AM - RE: we played till dark
Thanks for the comments. Thought about the suggestions.... i see your point(s), but i like the dominant strings. Burn and beg away BS hehe... yeah I'll make more slow stuff later.
Message 8/17 24-Sep-03 @ 04:21 PM - RE: we played till dark
Message 9/17 24-Sep-03 @ 06:01 PM - RE: we played till dark
Message 10/17 24-Sep-03 @ 06:07 PM - RE: we played till dark
I like the phasing on the beats. Nice dubby echos, too. I guess the string pads could be a little softer if I was going to be a picky bugger.
Neato.
Message 11/17 24-Sep-03 @ 06:46 PM - RE: we played till dark
Message 12/17 24-Sep-03 @ 08:53 PM - RE: we played till dark
Message 13/17 24-Sep-03 @ 10:12 PM - RE: we played till dark
Sound still plays second fiddle, after all these years. Shame.
Message 14/17 25-Sep-03 @ 05:11 AM - RE: we played till dark
one huge loving vibe...and you know how that agrees with me.
how could i be the only one to like this?!?!?!
Message 15/17 26-Sep-03 @ 06:36 AM - RE: we played till dark
Expensive reverb huh? Good news is its only 7:36 am and my only colleague around here really liked the song.
Mee too.
Message 16/17 26-Sep-03 @ 09:29 AM - RE: we played till dark
Message 17/17 26-Sep-03 @ 07:22 PM - RE: we played till dark
-M-
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