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Original Message 1/8 08-Nov-03 @ 07:00 AM - Symphony No. 1 - bs

Broken Silence

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Howdy-

Long time no see huh?

Yeah it's been a while and I lost my last track to logic being a dick- but got this one kind of done using that riff I posted in the "what composer" forum thingie

This is really not finished- I'm looking for any suggestions mixwise, structure, etc...I want to really work on this one and make it shine cause it's my first production in a while and I wanna make it "worth the absence"

So no holding back, tell me everything that's fucked up with this track, or anything that you might kinda like

Also to note that I posted it here! Gonna get used to doing that again...fuck soundclick.

It's in 56k...can upload a hifi somewhere but I think it sounds okay lofi...

Anyways take a listen and tell me what you think.

The track's called "Symphony No. 1" at my homepage here-

Thanks in advance,

Andrew

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Message 2/8 08-Nov-03 @ 06:27 PM - RE: Symphony No. 1 - bs

Broken Silence

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I just posted a hifi if interested at

Soundclick

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Message 3/8 08-Nov-03 @ 06:38 PM - RE: Symphony No. 1 - bs

Maarten

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I really like it, non-you "tho"

hmm.. the break doesnt work for me.. doesnt fit the beginning. OK, the arps after the break.. I dunno- objectively speaking I can hear they're nice but personnaly I was hoping you wouldn't go that direction really.. the first +/- two minutes ask for it's own version you know what I'm saying? See...from the 6:10ish point you go back to where it belongs imo. Just gotta take a diff take on that middle part me thinks. Well, that's my 'no holds barred' view on this. Glad to see your exploring some nice regions

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Message 4/8 09-Nov-03 @ 03:19 AM - RE: Symphony No. 1 - bs

Broken Silence

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Thanks mon- very appreciated. I know what you're saying but i just can't make a non melodic track!

Any other comments welcome

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Message 5/8 09-Nov-03 @ 12:17 PM - RE: Symphony No. 1 - bs

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Hey, I thought I'm not into trance anymore

but this is fucking awesome! Hope I can listen to a finished version soon!

Ps: "brooooahh" bass sound rocks, hehheee...

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Message 6/8 09-Nov-03 @ 02:16 PM - RE: Symphony No. 1 - bs

BluStudio

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hey boss,

just listening here - in lo-fi

sounds really cool, gets pretty dramatic there on the chorus

not as cheery as yer usual gear, gets really driving before the breakdown too which i liked - the wee stabby bit that runs tru most of it (comes in at 1.41 i think) is crying to be filtered up/down

i prefer my trance more on the white keys lol but this is good stuff again

sounds nice for lo-fi btw.

blu

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Message 7/8 09-Nov-03 @ 11:44 PM - RE: Symphony No. 1 - bs

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Thanks alan and raggy!!

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Message 8/8 10-Nov-03 @ 10:09 AM - RE: Symphony No. 1 - bs

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and... back to trance... damn fine sounding track though... really pounds away...

I can really see this working in a club

I think the break is ok, but a bit on the predictable side. and its that damn same sound again!!!! Throw away that patch at around 4:10 or so..

G

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